Wednesday, 20 October 2010

Lineart or not?


I'm not sure whether to use line art or what. This peice is tiring me out a little, I'm finding it hard to like for some reason and I can't put my finger on it. I don't think it's the colours or anything I think it lacks maybe some definition?

Anyway I desperately need your guys opinions! -cry-

1 comment:

  1. Maybe there is too much happening on one character. She has cloth on her left arm, armour on her right arm, spikes on her right boob, a chain-mesh helmet, a heavy breastplate and a crown. Maybe try and strip down some of these elements and build on the ones you like the most. Freer flowing hair may work too?

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